Sense of Space

In our final edit we decided to remove the narration from our work; originally a key component. I think this had positive effects on the final project although it did mean time was wasted patching over poor areas. If the project was planned better we could have re shot ounds needed and re-made thescript which was narrated poorly. A few stubborn effects remained in the final piece which i couldnt for the life of me find a way to remove. This effects the final piece greatly as does poor sound levels in two areas(door knocking and bins falling). I did enjoy the final piece however would have preffered to have created an alternative idea possibly exploring a more surreal area throughout rather than just a specific area. For future work of a similar style ill be sure to be completely drivin by an idea before choosing it for the final piece.